Thursday, February 02, 2006

The babe wore red...

This is a story that I wrote for the college yearbook. Please tell me what you think about it people.

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The bullets slammed into the wooden walls one after the other. Somewhere in the distance cannons boomed, the shells landing on households – the shrapnel shredding everything in its path, including human flesh – innocent or not.

The concept of innocence and guilty became skewed in the middle of an armed struggle. Brainwashed and disillusioned, young boys picked up guns when they should have been playing with toys and reading books. The heat of youth was what the ‘leaders’ counted on for a win. The reckless abandon that children enjoyed, they turned into a killing machine.

Ajay crouched with his wife, Anjali, and little Yatin in the corner. Anjali shielded Yatin with her body, lest he be hurt by flying debris. Ajay held the old rifle tightly, aware that if the militants stormed in, he had little chance of protecting his family. He was a man pulled into the fight against his will and wish. Neighbors with whom they had celebrated Id and Diwali, with the same joy were now mortal enemies.

Religion that had meant nothing more than simply a God to believe in, no matter what he was called, and to pray to in times of sorrow had split them apart. This wasn’t something that he or his neighbors had done. It was the result of dirty politics played in carpeted corridors and halls in the capital. It was the result of a few fanatical men who stopped at nothing to achieve what they believed in. No price was too high – not even a few thousand innocent deaths.

Yatin was barely a year old. The noise and Anjali’s tight grip made the baby scream at the top of his lungs. It was only a matter of time before they would be killed. Anjali fervently prayed, hoping for a miracle. The bullets continued to throw splinters over them. She wrapped her white shawl even more tightly around the baby. A drop of warm blood fell from a cut on her face on Yatin’s face and then slowly dissolved in the tears and flowed down his cheeks staining them crimson.

Kashmir that had once been paradise on earth had turned into a hell beyond imagination. The partition had created an irreversible situation. Strategically, the valley was important to both countries. Whoever controlled the mountains had the upper hand and neither side wanted to give that up.

Rashid ran from behind the low wall and took cover behind the shop on the corner. He had been hit by a stray bullet on the leg. He took a moment to recover his breath and planned his next move. He wasn’t going to last long. The bullet had severed several arteries and he was loosing blood fast. His end was near and he knew that. He just wanted to take as many as he could with him. He didn’t fear death as the others did. They had taught him that he would reach Heaven. He checked the safety on the AK-47 for the nth time.

Rashid was one of those who, by an unfortunate turn of events, had picked up the gun. It had happened quite sometime back. Eight months to be precise. He had returned home in the evening to find the front door open and a strange quietness that chilled his blood. He went in expecting the worst and found it. His family had been massacred –his mother, wife and three sisters. Their bodies riddled beyond recognition. He ran inside to see if the baby was still alive. The crib was empty. The rattle lay broken on the floor.

Rashid ignored the pain and fixed his sight on the house. It was a modest wooden structure – nondescript and plain like the hundred and thousand of houses in the valley. Between him and the front doors lay fifty yards of deserted road. He lifted his rifle and sprinted across the road. Bullets whined past and thumped harmlessly into the sidewalk. He burst in through the door, breaking it clean off its hinges with his sheer momentum. He began firing blindly.

Ajay and Anjali had been married three years and they were still childless. They had tried everything – medicines, treatment in the hospitals, quacks – but nothing seemed to work. Ajay taught history in the local school and Anjali sold flowers on the corner. Despite the circumstances, they were happy and in love with each other. She waited for him on the doorstep everyday in the evening. That day, he was late. Ajay walked past the house, when he heard the moans from inside. He walked inside to see a young girl in her finals moments of agony before dying. The bodies lay around bathed in blood. Then he heard the baby cry. He went inside and saw the little baby. He made his decision in an instant. He walked towards the baby and stepped on a rattle that lay there. He had picked the baby boy, wrapped in a shawl and taken it home. That was eight months ago.

The first bullet caught Anjali in the chest and she was dead before she hit the floor. Ajay took two bullets in his left arm, but managed to get a shot off before the next bullet blew his head apart. The rifle was loaded with buck shot and Rashid caught it full in the face. Yatin screamed as blood drenched him. He continued to scream as the blood soaked the shawl red.

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That's about it for now. I went to see Rang De Basanti last Sunday. This very very pretty girl half my year is dying to talk to came and talked to me. Yes...she came and asked me f I could buy extra tickets for her. I said I would try but in the end I couldnt manage. Oh...that look on her face. Damn..! Oh and she is at least a couple of years older and from what I have heard women don't dig younger men.

Sigh!

14 comments:

Safari Al said...

You say so?

Thanks. Love you!

DuhGodess said...

You have quite an imagination and its no wonder...
Splendidly woven..I must say..

silverine said...

Safari Al you have a career in writing. I can guess the ending. Rashid will do what Ajay did and pick up the kid that was his and the cycle will be complete. He will breathe his last not knowing that his son was made an orphan twice. Beautiful!!!

DuhGodess said...

Just about finished reading your entire blog.
You single ??? hahaha...
Im kidding...
But seriously, boy, you've gotten yourself into the wrong profession.
Lets just say if you had to write a book, i'd make my whole family buy it !!!

what a blog!! what a blog!! what a blog !!

If I tell ya, I'll have to kill ya said...

WOW...

I don't have words. That was beautifully written. Silverine summed it up just as beautifully as you left it hanging in the air. I don't often feel emotional while reading...but this one did it.

Splendid job, I must say, considering you are no where near the Kashmir conflict as far as I know.

If I tell ya, I'll have to kill ya said...

BTW, who told you women didn't like younger men eh??

Demi Moore, Elizabeth Taylor, Liza Minelli (I shudder with the last one, nonetheless...), ME!

C'mon....

The Girl Who Sold The World said...

WOW! WOW! WOWWW!!! This was amazing! You've a great flair for writing. Just loved the way it was left kinda hanging in the air...it made it all the more interesting...

Safari Al said...

@duhgodess: thanks. i wish i could get dwn to writing, but i have a sneaky feeling that any storyline i pick would involve software engineering(check out the previous post). not a comforting thought. as for asking your family to buy it...i seriously do feel warm inside. that was a big compliment.


@silverine:now that i read the ending again, i realised that it isnt very clear that rashid id killed too. the kid is left orphan all over again. at least that is what i inteneded. and thanks for reading through it.

@ifitellyaillhavetokillya: thanks for reading the post and thanks for the little fact that you clarified. :p...yipee i have a future.

@thegirlwhosoldtheworld: thanks. will check out your blog in its full glory once this stupid teacher stops breathing down my neck. Christ what a pain.

Thank you all you people for dropping by.

silverine said...

I want more such stories!!! *bawl*

Shashi Iyer said...

very nice

Safari Al said...

@silverine: ill try! God promise...

@can you see my halo: Thanks :)

Indus Creep said...

Nice maga...very nice. Brilliant.

Shankar said...

this was too good.....

YS said...

nice piece of writing ..
it got me wondering for long ..
keep it going .. cheers.